| Submitted by: A`J_Knight Email address: ann_m_nelson@bigpond.com Subject: Character Application
Character origin place: Original
Physical Description: Height: 6 foot 1 inch Powers/Abilities: AJ has the power to charge objects with kentic engery ... He got this power when his father who was studying the rift accendital turn on a power gentor while AJ was holding .... the shock didnt kill AJ put did remove his scence of touch. In the same accendent AJ father James died ... Character History: At the age of twelve AJ age was sent to Australia to his grandmother and her tribe .. Even thought his grandmother was white she had been accepted into the clan ... There Aj learn how to fight and how to throw a boomerange ... When Age was 16 he moved back to the USA where he lived on the street he learnt how to use a throwing knife quite well .... on his 18 birthday his gandmother send over the only possion that she had of AJ's father ... a Colt .45 ... AJ practise for 3 years out in texas living on a ranch learning to shoot straight and live honestly after that he dieced to move back to his home town and that is where we pick up the story Extra Information: AJ is a strong quite type that loves pressure ... But place a pretty face in front of him he will crumble .... that and the lack of touch .... Another problem that AJ is dealing with is his Temper .... He tends to lose easily and doesnt think before he acts ... |
The Overall idea of this character getting along with any of his peers is nil. Maybe it just me, but I don't see any true purpose or meaning to this 'AJ' character or any reason why he'd come to G-Town to begin with. What I am saying here is to please give some reason or explination of the character's arrival to the fair city or something.
It's not normally possible to sense or study the Rifts. Yes. That's what most people get from their grandmothers as soon as they reach age of majority. A handcannon. If he got it for his 18th birthday, practiced for 3 years, and is now 18, someone doesn't know basic math. If nothing else turned me off, the inability to type does. While in another context, I wouldn't consider it something to judge a person on, in this case it's tantamount to the ability to.. well.. play. ^^;; Just as I'd be hesitant to RP at home with someone who can't manage to speak anything better than SNK's translators, I have serious misgivings about this person being able to... well... play and be understood. |
| Submitted by: -JP- Email address: viper15_99_2000@hotmail.com Subject: Character Application Character origin place: Movie Character's_name: JP Physical Description: he stands about 5'8" with short brown hair with a little braid in the back, and his eyes are blue. he wears a blue vest and white pants. he wears a white belt to keep the vest closed. he wears black shoes just right for martial arts. he likes to spar and loves to enjoy the peaceful things in life. Powers/Abilities: he is well studied in every field of martial arts. Character History: When he was a boy his father use to fight in competitions. that is how he got to become a martial artist. his father once won the world tournament and from then on JP has only trained to follow in his fathers footsteps. easy to make friends he takes any chances he can to relax and have a good time. Extra Information: The only problem he has is girls. he is shy even though he is 18. |
Seriously. When he puts in some details on something other than his damn shoes, then I'll think about us accepting it.
18 years old.. and 'well studied' in every field of martial arts? No unless this guy decides to expand on the app. Yep. This one's a definite fresh from the dalnet Dragonball Z rpgs where they kill each others characters daily and powergame to the max. *thumbs down* |